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“Tokyo-based” in 0.1
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Cybozu, a Tokyo-based global software company.
- I think “Tokyo-based” is not important
- How about: “Cybozu, a global software company that provides web-based groupware services.”
- Or, If you intended to show the author is in east-asian culture, “Cybozu, a global software company founded in Japan”
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“articulate” in 0.1.2
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I was able to translate what I was doing unconsciously into words
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I was able to articulate what I was doing unconsciously
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The word “articulate” looks a little difficult for non-native
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“there is an opposite opinion.” in 0.1.2
- Sould it be “there are some opposite opinions.” ?
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