video https://youtu.be/VG-nOzTgW2M

    1. It’s a waste of time to have prototypes but no images or videos.
  • (2) Overuse of bold and text color is a waste of time.

  • (iii) No priorities are attached, which is a waste of time.

    1. “oo is great! So xx is great too!” is a waste!
  • (5) It would be a waste if some of the use cases are unclear.

  • (6) It’s a waste of time to have no sample code even though it’s a proposal for a system system.

  • (vii) It’s a waste of a proposal that emphasizes low prices, but without concrete figures.

  • (8) I haven’t looked into similar services and it’s a waste of time.

  • (ix) “How do you make it happen?” part is abstract and a waste of time.

  • [Adoption is, frankly, luck.


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