Tanka Class for the mediocre by the geniuses

• 31-mora Japanese poem] Classroom for the mediocre by the genius

  • Tatsuya Kinoshita

• Amazon

• Create a summary in tanka

• Amateurs quickly run out of characters, but the formulas that history has created are weapons.

• A layman trying to follow a formula would cut down on particles and chop them up.

  • It’s too obvious and funny.
    • For now, let’s just enjoy the frame as a puzzle without removing the particles from the future.
    • Word order swapping puzzles occur because the fixed form is fulfilled without removing particles.
    • You have to have the vocabulary to fit it in well without garbage like “for now.”

• You wrote that I should make it a daily habit, but honestly, I’m Not good at continuity.

  • I wonder if the fine tuning of GPT-3 will help.
  • Make a fantasy of making GPT-3 a fine-tuning corpus.
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    • WW is too free.
  • I tried to put “compose a tanka poem” into AI and was scolded to “write it yourself.
    • I feel like I’m just describing the facts.

• From the beginning to the end, everyone sees the poetic form of tanka poetry at the same time.

  • I see what you mean.
  • Select and design the text type of the string because it will be seen at a moment’s notice

• The sense of choosing “sticky sticky Hikaru” instead of the familiar “sparkling sparkling Hikaru”!

• Does your work improve with socializing? Watch the blank sheet of paper rather than the faces of others.

  • Would you like me to cut this “person” head off?
  • The work doesn’t get better with a relationship. You’d rather look at a blank piece of paper than at someone’s face.

• First we build a strong individual, then we will go together into the unknown.

  • I wonder if it is better to say “Let’s go together into the unknown 7” or “Let’s go together into the unknown 7” in order to keep the pattern.
  • In layman’s terms, the latter seems to sit better.
  • Ah, well, it’s better to solve this with an expanded perspective instead of trying to work this out with a tweak of a particle.
  • First we will build a strong individual, and then we will climb a mountain together that has yet to be seen.

• Most of the people who give me shit are the ones who aren’t doing a good job of making their own.

  • Programming is the same in this area.

• Apparently, if you have a million yen, you can publish a book of poems, and the first book of poems was published at your own expense.

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