The way you write the introduction of the paper, you need to dig deeper in the form of selection of the Multiple Choice. If you omit that and write only the result of the selection, you will not convey the difficulty and the greatness of what you have done. If you lean too much on other choices, you won’t be able to convey what you are trying to say. --- Tsubasa Yumura image

  • Experience in the brain is a complex network of interconnected structures.
    • If you write down suggestion as you wish, you will get a diagram of “[Too many detours.
  • If you take only what is logically necessary for the conclusion, you get an “omitting too much” diagram.
    • In some situations, that’s OK.
  • If you want to talk about choices from multiple options, you need to explain the options
    • Talk about a difficult balance.

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